| What are the elements of a
strong Statement of Purpose?
1. Clear indication of prior study in previous
institution.
For instance, what was your major or major interest and
why? What courses did you take or papers did you write that
demonstrated academic excellence?
2. What motivated you? What obstacles did
you have to overcome?
3. Write clearly about and specifically
about the extent to which the Afro-American Studies Program
at UCLA would facilitate that research.
For instance, which specific professors at UCLA are doing
research that accords with your interest(s) or potential
interests?
What does it mean to convey a “scholarly
agenda”?
1. A scholarly agenda simply means: this
is what I intend to study at your institution.
2. The scholarly agenda generally has two parts:
Ø Background – what
I’ve done in the past (papers written, special class projects
or research conducted or assisted, conferences attended,
courses taken (name specific professors at your previous
institution)
Ø Forward- How I intend
to continue that research in the future
For instance, name a few of the courses at UCLA you intend
to take and explain how they will help you with your research
agenda.
How do I explain my own personal circumstances?
1. If the application calls for a separate
Personal Statement, indicate your personal situation there.
If not, work it into the Statement of Purpose briefly and
clearly.
2. Place the personal material toward the end, after discussion
of your scholarly agenda.
3. If you have specific life challenges that you have had
to overcome in order to accomplish what you did academically,
briefly state an example of what you did.
For instance, if a student’s GPA is lower, he or she might
explain that family circumstances forced him or her to work
and help support the family. (Some students have families
of their own.)
4. Also indicate other achievements in your school, community,
or workplace that demonstrate your ability to set and keep
goals, make and keep commitments, and be trustworthy. For
instance, a student may have been a volunteer leader in
his or her church or community center.
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